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 Bismarck.Magnuss
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By Bismarck.Magnuss 2012-07-17 10:46:36
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That's not nearly as bad as you might think it is. I could see that being an epic.
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By Cerberus.Kalyna 2012-07-17 10:46:38
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Here's a poem:

Roses are red
Violets are blue
When I see you here
Go *** yourself you dirty ***
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By Asura.Dameshi 2012-07-17 10:49:15
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Ramuh.Rowland said: »
That touched my heart.
:) Does this mean I don't have to hide in the closet tonight?

Bismarck.Magnuss said: »
That's not nearly as bad as you might think it is. I could see that being an epic.
Thank you Mag. It means a lot coming from our resident English junkie.
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By Asura.Dameshi 2012-07-17 10:51:30
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Damn D:
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By Asura.Dameshi 2012-07-17 10:53:31
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I've never read or watched Harry Potter <.<
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By Lakshmi.Flavin 2012-07-17 10:54:06
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Cerberus.Kalyna said: »
Here's a poem: Roses are red Violets are blue When I see you here Go *** yourself you dirty ***
I lol'd at this way too hard...
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By Bismarck.Magnuss 2012-07-17 10:54:17
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Asura.Dameshi said: »
Bismarck.Magnuss said: »
That's not nearly as bad as you might think it is. I could see that being an epic.
Thank you Mag. It means a lot coming from our resident English junkie.
Dude, I'm jonesin' here. I need a quick fix. C'mon, just one copy of Wuthering Heights... You know I'm good for it.

Honestly though, you've got a good flow, there. The last line could use some work, but it's got potential.
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By Cerberus.Kalyna 2012-07-17 10:54:49
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Dame, at least it's better than twilight.
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By Lakshmi.Flavin 2012-07-17 10:55:48
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Asura.Dameshi said: »
I've never read or watched Harry Potter <.<
I'm going to get Liela to punish you for this.
I'm actually in the same boat there...
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By Bismarck.Magnuss 2012-07-17 10:56:08
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Asura.Dameshi said: »
I've never read or watched Harry Potter <.<
I haven't, either. I avoided it like the plague. Although if someone were to tell me that I had to read either Harry Potter or the Twilight series or I'd be shot, I'd Dumbledore it up.
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By Asura.Dameshi 2012-07-17 10:59:50
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Bismarck.Magnuss said: »
Asura.Dameshi said: »
Bismarck.Magnuss said: »
That's not nearly as bad as you might think it is. I could see that being an epic.
Thank you Mag. It means a lot coming from our resident English junkie.
Dude, I'm jonesin' here. I need a quick fix. C'mon, just one copy of Wuthering Heights... You know I'm good for it.

Honestly though, you've got a good flow, there. The last line could use some work, but it's got potential.
<.<
>.>
*hands Mag a brown paper bag*
We never met!

I keep saying I'm going to start writing another story and I just never do it! I need to just sit down and start spewing out words one night. I think the hardest part is starting!
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By Bismarck.Magnuss 2012-07-17 11:01:45
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Asura.Dameshi said: »
Bismarck.Magnuss said: »
Asura.Dameshi said: »
Bismarck.Magnuss said: »
That's not nearly as bad as you might think it is. I could see that being an epic.
Thank you Mag. It means a lot coming from our resident English junkie.
Dude, I'm jonesin' here. I need a quick fix. C'mon, just one copy of Wuthering Heights... You know I'm good for it.

Honestly though, you've got a good flow, there. The last line could use some work, but it's got potential.
<.<
>.>
*hands Mag a brown paper bag*
We never met!

I keep saying I'm going to start writing another story and I just never do it! I need to just sit down and start spewing out words one night. I think the hardest part is starting!
For me it's continuing. I'll start a story, get really into it and write up a bunch. Then I'll hit a wall and tell myself that I'll get back to it later. I never get back to it. I've been trying to get back into this one story I started writing, but it's tough. I think I need to stop being lazy and type up another page or two. Discipline is the root of this problem.
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By Siren.Mosin 2012-07-17 11:02:43
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DAMN HIPSTERS!
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By Bismarck.Magnuss 2012-07-17 11:03:38
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Siren.Mosin said: »
DAMN HIPSTERS!
Calm down... here, have a banana.
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By Bismarck.Magnuss 2012-07-17 11:04:35
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Did you post it here? If so I don't think I saw it.
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By Siren.Mosin 2012-07-17 11:06:40
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ommmnumnumomomnuonmuoounm
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By Lakshmi.Flavin 2012-07-17 11:07:07
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Ramuh.Rowland said: »
Lakshmi.Flavin said: »
Ramuh.Rowland said: »
Asura.Dameshi said: »
I've never read or watched Harry Potter <.<
I'm going to get Liela to punish you for this.
I'm actually in the same boat there...
You're just a hipster, that's why.
I take offense to this...
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By Asura.Dameshi 2012-07-17 11:16:14
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Bismarck.Magnuss said: »
Asura.Dameshi said: »
Bismarck.Magnuss said: »
Asura.Dameshi said: »
Bismarck.Magnuss said: »
That's not nearly as bad as you might think it is. I could see that being an epic.
Thank you Mag. It means a lot coming from our resident English junkie.
Dude, I'm jonesin' here. I need a quick fix. C'mon, just one copy of Wuthering Heights... You know I'm good for it.

Honestly though, you've got a good flow, there. The last line could use some work, but it's got potential.
<.<
>.>
*hands Mag a brown paper bag*
We never met!

I keep saying I'm going to start writing another story and I just never do it! I need to just sit down and start spewing out words one night. I think the hardest part is starting!
For me it's continuing. I'll start a story, get really into it and write up a bunch. Then I'll hit a wall and tell myself that I'll get back to it later. I never get back to it. I've been trying to get back into this one story I started writing, but it's tough. I think I need to stop being lazy and type up another page or two. Discipline is the root of this problem.
I have that problem too. Well I think I lose my focus, really. I start going off on tangents and lose focus of where the story was going, then I decide it's not worth it to try to salvage! I call it Chronicles Syndrome.
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By Lakshmi.Flavin 2012-07-17 11:20:26
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I haven't been in a writing mood. I enjoyed Spence's Chronicles because the entries were short but full of detail and action. I dunno how well my story actually was. There wasn't that much feedback. Maybe I'm just being Sect on myself.
LMAO!
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By Bismarck.Magnuss 2012-07-17 11:22:04
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Asura.Dameshi said: »
I have that problem too. Well I think I lose my focus, really. I start going off on tangents and lose focus of where the story was going, then I decide it's not worth it to try to salvage! I call it Chronicles Syndrome.
Yeah, exactly like that. I have ADD and most of my characters do too. I find that if you don't go off on those digressions though that it doesn't feel as lifelike. You could write up something like:

I walked to the store to get a pack of baseball cards.

But it doesn't work quite as well as:

While walking to the store to get a pack of baseball cards, I came across an old creek and for a moment thought back to the time where my friend and I went fishing.

It sort of sets up your character with more development, etc. However, you do get caught up in those moments and lose track of where you're going with it. I suppose in those moments an outline would help, but... well, who does those anyway?

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Bismarck.Magnuss said: »
Did you post it here? If so I don't think I saw it.
The choose your own adventure?

It was more exciting while I was writing it. People would send me PMs to vote which direction the story should go. I'd try to write a part at least once a week.
You know, I do remember something like that, but I wasn't really into this forum as much then as I am, now. Sucks that I missed out on that, though. That sounds awesome.
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By Cerberus.Kalyna 2012-07-17 11:24:57
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Is it 4PM yet?

I wanna go home and play TERA
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